Posted by Ashley in Poetry
When I was Young
Once when I was young
I went for a ride on a plane
And I stopped believing.
For where else can Heaven be
If not on the tops of clouds?
A kingdom that vast,
Cannot be invisible.
Angels are not cruel enough to hide.
Where did the castle made of clouds
And miracles go?
Was it ever even there?
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Hey! I almost feel like you should have two versions of this: one where it stops at “for where else can heaven be if not on the tops of clouds” and one that either takes out the “kingdom that vast…” line and ditch the ver last line. That is just me, but try it and see what you think!